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0|0|0|||1||One Step Forward%2C etc.|Gryphon||21:58:05|03/30/2014|Then there%27s the moment where you%27re 36K into a story and realize it should be in the first person.%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A%5Bfont size%3D%221%22%5Dgevalt%5B%2Ffont%5D%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited  http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D
1|1|0|||||RE%3A One Step Forward%2C etc.|discord||18:03:46|03/31/2014|D%3A%0D%0A%0D%0Abeen there%2C done that%2C gryph. %3A%28
2|1|0|||||RE%3A One Step Forward%2C etc.|TheOtherSean||21:25:40|03/31/2014|%3EThen there%27s the moment where you%27re 36K into a story and realize it %0D%0A%3Eshould be in the first person. %0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%3E--G. %0D%0A%0D%0AIt%27s things like that which make me long for advancements in computational linguistics so you can just choose a %22story refactoring%22 like you can with source code.  Imagine being able to easily change tense%2C point-of-view%2C reliably adjust character details %28name%2Fsex%2Fnationality%2Fetc.%29 or timeline with just a few simple commands.  
3|1|0|||1||RE%3A One Step Forward%2C etc.|Mercutio||22:36:30|03/31/2014|This intrigues me%2C as you haven%27t done a lot of first-person work in the past. There%27s been plenty of third-person limited%2C but I%27m hard pressed to think of much full-on%2C Chronicles of Amber style first person.%0D%0A%0D%0A-Merc%0D%0AKeep Rat
4|2|3|||1||RE%3A One Step Forward%2C etc.|Gryphon||23:16:29|03/31/2014|%3EThis intrigues me%2C as you haven%27t done a lot of first-person work in %0D%0A%3Ethe past. There%27s been plenty of third-person limited%2C but I%27m hard %0D%0A%3Epressed to think of much full-on%2C Chronicles of Amber style first %0D%0A%3Eperson. %0D%0A%0D%0AOff the top of my head%2C there%27s %5Bi%5DAnd So They Met%5B%2Fi%5D%2C %5Bi%5DBlades%5B%2Fi%5D%2C %5Bi%5DThe Vulcan Heart%5B%2Fi%5D%2C and%2C uh%2C all of %5Bi%5DWarrior%27s Legacy%5B%2Fi%5D.  The percentage is low%2C I grant you%2C but it%27s not completely alien territory.%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited  http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D
5|3|4|||1||RE%3A One Step Forward%2C etc.|twipper||12:09:21|04/01/2014|As a vaguely related aside%2C %27Blades%27 is for me one of the best constructed stories published here%2C easily in the top five%2C if not one or two.  And WL is still possibly my favorite storyline here%2C given its shear %27Nightside%27esque over-the-topness.  %0D%0A%0D%0AWell-written 1st person fiction is not easy to come by%2C so I take any that I find. %3A%29%0D%0A%0D%0ABrian%0D%0A