>>>Dorothy's originally from "Kane's World"? As in "Bob Kane", perhaps?
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>>Indeed. We've seen Kane's World once before, in an extremely short
>>and incoherent Exile story entitled Inception.
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>The main problem is that it doesn't really make sense without at least
>one other story to reference against. It's a flash, a single incident in what was a much longer week. Personally, I thought the rest of it could be pretty easily glarked from context; it was very much an experiment (like several Exile stories), but given that it was written in 35 minutes, I thought it came out pretty well.
--G.
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