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#0, Fifth Movement: A Dragon's opinon
Posted by Matrix Dragon on Oct-30-01 at 04:16 AM
Lemme guess Gryph, you were trying to fit every UF hero into this piece? I lost track of counting appearances.

Once again, I'm very impressed. You've put your usual style into this, and I can't describe everything I like, so I'll go for a few specifics:

1) Kate's Birthday celebrations: The presents were great work, many of them showing off the personalities of the characters. But the prize goes to Mac, with his latest masterpiece in the suffering Broadbank range. (Tribble Food! Brilliant!) Bell came in a close second with the Tiger Suit.

2) Toronto again: The concert was nice, and Rina showing up again made it even better. The whole Devlin/Amanda/Rina + Azalynn conversation over the night broke me several times. Add in another appearance by Mac and poor G'Kron (Both of whom are moving up my ranks of favorite UF characters) and I was happy.

3) Psi-cop bitch: Once again, Psi-Corps proves its stupidity. She's stupid enough to scan Kate without their permission, followed by everyone else making her suffer. Great work by Devlin and Amanda, fooling her completely. As for pissing off Mia, you NEVER piss off a Minbari. Also had a nice cameo by Truss (He lives in Australia?!)

4) Nall: Poor bastard. Going so long without Utena's shoulders. I just like all the twists and turns keeping him out of the main story line.

5) The Summer Formal: Fine quality, from Azalynn getting everyone in, to Utena getting her outfit (I knew you'd find a way to fit the Challenger into SOS somewhere) to the actual event itself. A fine example of Dorothy's changes when she took down Broadbitch so easily, plus her conversation with Miki after they leave. Kate and Juri was also interesting.

6) The ending: Oh Fuck..... That's all I can say. Things are about to get messy.

Great work Gryph

Matrix Dragon