#30, RE: Yet another question: Captain Utena Tenjou
Posted by Star Ranger4 on Nov-03-01 at 01:14 AM
In response to message #24
>>>That was originally covered in a longer version of the scene aboard >>>the ship itself, but it turned into a tremendously long-winded "meet >>>the crew of the ship" sequence, so I deleted it. It will probably get >>>covered in retrospect at some later point. >>> >>I hope you didn't throw it away totaly. If it never gets covered you >>can always finish it off and release it as a side story. Yeah, it >>doesn't move the main story forward, so maybe it doesn't belong in the >>main line, but there are bunches of us who would love to read it >>anyway. ^_^ > >No, I didn't throw it out. As I said, I'll probably use it as a >flashback later. >Or you can just release it as a stand alone aside scene. I had to do that... Had this great sort of air combat scene that started of a chapter of my story, then realized that it didn't do a darn thing as far as moving the plot forward, so I cut it and made it an interlude. ___________________ Vaughn doesn't know I exist. I guess this explains why the rest of reality keeps ignoring me as well. >_<
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