FYI: whoa! I like it (like that's a surprise!) quite a lot. I've been fond of Utena for a while so it's nice to see her making what looks like an major appearance in an Eyrie fic...As to the Corwin question stated above, I didn't twig the Ravenhair till I actually read the whole thing (good job I wasn't drinking when it clicked). No way is he the amberite... that would make Gryphon into Oberon and that's just not gonna happen to my mind. (unless I just provoked it)
And any fic that gets me interested in what happens in an baseball game (my tolerance for spectating any sport is just about zip) has to get points.
I'll be looking out for further stuff on this arc... whenever you get around to it... or anything else. Least you're faster that I am at writing this stuff (though you could hardly be slower)
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(I'm on a caffine hihg - does it show?)