Just finished. Don't know if anyone cares, but I know nearly nothing about Mass Effect, and was able to follow things fine (so far). I only made one dip into the annotation thread to get straightened out, because I thought either I was misreading things or else there was a massive typo about who's granddaughter Arna was (I somehow got it in my head that Jeffrey and Kaidan were brothers, and after consulting the annotations, there was no typo).

Hurray for the return of Amanda, and a bigger Hurray for the Return of Rina, Stealer of Scenes (but not really in this story)

Are the Collectors the same guys from The Vastru Encounter? I note the credits "introduce" them, yet Vastru was the previous story in the FI list (also noted the author's comment that he knows the chronology isn't updated yet)

Jeanne

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