Nice work!

3 queries:

1. "Raven's my apprentice,"

Appentice in what ? Katsujinkenryuu ?

2. "I understand you've approved Grissom for the Test of Light."

Test of Light needs to be approved by the First Lensman ?

3. "ALSO PRESENT: GRISSOM, Giol'bertis NMI (SA1)"

So Grissom will be relocated to SA1, or he will be working on
both branches ? Correct me if I am worng, to my believe, grey
Lensmen is not in SA1.

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