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Topic ID: 2265
Message ID: 13
#13, RE: CSINA 109 - Outward Trajectory.
Posted by Offsides on Dec-27-07 at 10:35 AM
In response to message #0
On one hand, I really liked a lot of this episode, and there were definitely many, many good parts to it. On the other hand, there were a number of parts that felt kind of rushed, not-quite-ready-for-prime-time, if you know what I mean. I think the best way to describe it is that they felt like those scenes where the criminalist hands the tech the evidence, we see a quick montage of them processing, and then they provide the results. Only those usually skip just the unnecessary bits, whereas I felt that some of the skipped pieces here were necessary, for flow if nothing else. I'll have to re-read it and give specific examples when I have a little more time - I did the initial ready at 6:45am when I got up this morning :)

That being said, I still enjoyed it, and look forward to seeing various bits that have been revealed come together down the line. It's nice to know that Clarissa has been "revealed" - I wonder how the rest of her contemporaries and their compatriots will react - I'm sure a few of them will be kicking themselves for not killing her in school when the were younger :) And then there's the question of what will happen to the Broadbank adults - her parents may not have known they were doing so (though one wonders about that), but they were definitely providing material support and refuge to a wanted criminal and known terrorist organization...

Here's hoping we get to find out what happens to all the dangling storylines one of these days :)

Offsides

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