Yay, more CSI:NA!

Good to see that you're back into the swing of things, Gryph. Thanks for this latest installment.

As for the cliffhanger, I felt robbed at first, but then I went back and read it again (without a 2-day break in between due to work this time), and it does flow well, prepping a set-up for part 2. In my mind's theatre, I hear the fading police sirens as the screen fades to black, followed by the credits:

Executive Producer:
Benjamin D. Hutchins

Feels just like the real thing.

Looking forward to the next installment,
-T.Z.

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"I believe that when life gives you lemons, you make lemonade.
Then find someone whose life gives them vodka and have a party."
--Ron White, stand-up comedian.

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