#1, RE: Rogue Squadron: small edits & HD remaster
Posted by Lime2K on Aug-05-19 at 11:35 AM
In response to message #0
LAST EDITED ON Aug-05-19 AT 11:57 AM (EDT) Been rereading them, and noticed some tiny glitches. There’s an extraneous symbol left in the flashback sequence in part 1: an extra > after ‘finally’. And parts 1, 2 and 4 have a few double em dashes where only one is supposed to be. Still a great story, and one of my favorites! -------------- Lime2K The One True Evil Overlord is also amused that iOS thinks Kozue’s Warrior number is a telephone number
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