Also,

>Been rereading them, and noticed some tiny glitches.
>There’s an extraneous symbol left in the flashback sequence in part
>1: an extra > after ‘finally’.

Hmm. I couldn't find this one, that bit looks OK on my screen...

>And parts 1, 2 and 4 have a few double em dashes where only one is
>supposed to be.

... but these are fixed. What actually happened there was that there was supposed to be a paragraph break between them, but the way my script for adding <p> tags works, it didn't pick those up. I'll have to be on the lookout for that now that I know it happens.

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