>>Been rereading them, and noticed some tiny glitches.
>>There’s an extraneous symbol left in the flashback sequence in part
>>1: an extra > after ‘finally’.
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>Hmm. I couldn't find this one, that bit looks OK on my screen...

Well, it would help if I used the correct word there (I blame my lack of caffeine). The area in question is:

"Your brother, eh? I'd have expected that kind of smile on the face of somebody looking forward to a different> kind of weekend."