This line may or may not appear as shown in the final product, but it captures the vibe of the scene nicely, and I'm enjoying it too much not to share. (Besides, after the fall I've had, I'm just happy to be working on something, even if it is a completely random project that isn't any of the hundred and eleventy-seven things I already had going.)

"Do you know Nietzsche? 'Whoever fights monsters should see to it that in the process he does not become a monster.' Well, I'm already a monster, and now I'm gonna show you how the Nakajima do things downtown, you crab-faced son of a bitch."

--G.
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Ceterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.