Well, is it just me or is this story coming out faster with every part? Great work Gryph, you've written something far better then many of the normal novels they sell these days.

The duelling club was well done, with the defeat of Broadbitch making it even better. She's become the perfect spoiled little rich girl, thinking that she's better then anyone else. She's really got her work cut out for her now, with all of the duelling club working together against her. The beating she got this time was good, although I can't help but feel she deserves worse, thanks to what she did to everyone. More proof you've written well, when I start to think of all the characters as real people.

It's nice to see Dorothy actually out and about, although her treatment at the hands of Broadbitch and Harris a sad example of racism. They don't even consider her to be alive. And people wonder why she doesn't seem to care much about herself at times.

The telepath debate seems to be getting worse, with so many students leaving WPI. I'm kind of curious about how that will be dealt with in the end. Heh, more reason to keep reading!

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