1.0) I like the fact that Devlin doesn't even think about spacefolding for the travel to Gamilon.
1.1)I like the fact that Devlin is kept totally in the dark about it, due to his complete lack of understanding of the Gamilion language.

2.0) Ok, hell, I'm to tired to do a full run through now, but I promise I'll finish it tommorow afternoonish, at the latest. Tommorow morning more likely. But first:

3.0) Devlin is a blip? (Hey! Someone else who read the psi-corps trilogy!) Suddenly his vehmence on being anti-psi corps, and also how much he was pissed at Dr. Harrison for his dismissal of Dorthy, just because of who she was. It also explains why he tries so hard to just kind of blend into the normal freaks. Even if they found out, more then likely they wouldn't care. They don't ask questions who's answers might be painful/problematic to the answeree. And he's more then likely to just blend in. So, does he have a red card? I mean, not a real one, but a fake one? (I'm assuming that it's kinda like immunization records for public schools. You can get in without them, but it requires more paper work.)
3.1) Who is footing his bill at WPI? The underground isn't rich enough, I doubt that he's got the personal cash (Ok, stupid assumption.)
3.2)Ok you bastards, was this planned the whole time?
3.3)I like the scene with him yelling at a drape. Very nifty. I was wondering where he had picked up super-hearing. The psi bit didn't even come into consideration.

I once again am astonished at the continued ability that you fellows(and, if fellowette's should have helped, then fellowette's as well) show, with a cast of mostly unique characters. Whom I've alway's liked a bit more then your fan-fic's, but that's just 'cause I like originality (which you people OOZE)

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-Pasha
Umm, right....I'll be with you in just a sec now...