Further advice on NaNoWriMo:See if there's a local group who get together to write. There's one in my hometown and they get together each weekend in November to write in company, talk about their stories and have contests of who can write most in half an hour. Lots of fun.
Don't ask them to review your work IN November, but after November (and after you've applied arcane measures like spell-checks) you may find you have a whole new bunch of literary victims/collaberators.