>That would be the "support network" I don't have anymore. The last
>beta reader I had that actually responded with constructive criticism
>was a fellow named Phil Moyer.
>
>(Which gives you an idea just how long it's been...)

You might have to go out there and brave the slings and arrows of public forums, then. I... don't actually know where to go on the internet for help with original writing. ^.^; If this were fanfiction I'd just tell you to go to spacebattles.

>That's EXACTLY how Otaku Rising got started, although
>technically Cor did the initial steal. :)

Otaku Rising is pretty goddamn bad (no offense) but I'll say this for it; it's structurally sound. You understand things like how to format for readability, when it's appropriate to do a scene transition, etc. So you've got that going for you.

You know how to BUILD the house. You just need to work on, y'know, furnishing it.

-Merc
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