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Forum Name: Symphony of the Sword/The Order of the Rose
Topic ID: 223
Message ID: 19
#19, RE: Clarion Call
Posted by zerosumgame on Jul-28-08 at 09:25 PM
In response to message #0
An enjoyable read, as always. Having now seen the sheer number of people involved, I can dimly comprehend the logistical difficulties you were having.

That said, it feels like part 1.

You've connected a few dots, and we've seen some references to chunks of backstory (significant and minor-but-interesting), but for all the flash, and all the buildup...

...we don't get much.

We were expecting a wedding (like Corwin and Utena's guests), and we didn't get one (also like said guests).

We also don't get the major action sequence.

I -liked- this one, don't get me wrong, but I sincerely hope the next installment comes out soon. I think it will lose a lot of impact otherwise.

Regards,
Jason