>That said, it feels like part 1.

Two, actually. Of seven.

>We were expecting a wedding (like Corwin and Utena's guests), and we
>didn't get one (also like said guests).

Well, to be fair, you got more of one than the guests did. :)

>We also don't get the major action sequence.

True. The original plan for this movement involved both the call to action and the action, but I realized partway into the process that if I did that, it'd probably end up being about 300K. I made the "two sequential events that should've been two sequential movements" mistake with The Revolution Will Be Televised and didn't want to repeat it. Besides, I suspect what comes next will be different enough in tone that it'd be a bit jarring to have it all as one movement.

>I -liked- this one, don't get me wrong, but I sincerely hope the next
>installment comes out soon. I think it will lose a lot of impact
>otherwise.

Welp, guess I better get to work, then.

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