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Forum Name: Symphony of the Sword/The Order of the Rose
Topic ID: 223
Message ID: 31
#31, RE: Clarion Call
Posted by Polychrome on Jul-29-08 at 02:05 AM
In response to message #0
One thing that bothered me was the response to Akio's arrival, where the characters rushed to immediately inform Corwin and Utena. I can see this from the younger members of the party, but Belldandy at the very least would know that you don't bring problems with the wedding to the bride and groom unless absolutely necessary. I realize this isn't really a story problem, but it just made me go "No! You Do Not Do That." which is pretty uncommon with your stories.

Polychrome