>Is this more what you had in mind?

Nice!

>I can't get the lettering right yet, but the kit did have Star of
>Avalon Pennant that I was able to modify for the top warp nacelle.

Well, the ship in question belongs to the WDF anyway, and they don't use the Star of Avalon as an insignia - just some blue striping (where Starfleet uses red, not that it matters in a monochrome image :) and the time-honored WDF diamond.

>And I did move the Torpedo Bays to the nose instead of under the
>saucer. I thought it looked better recessed there.

That does look good (and it's consistent with those round openings on the front of the saucer in TOS-era diagrams, even though those probably aren't supposed to be torpedo tubes). The effects guys just sort of drew photon torpedoes coming from nowhere in the original show anyway. :)

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