...and I found something that confused me:
"Oh." They walked in silence for a few minutes; then, while
they waited on the subway platform for the train to arrive, Anne
asked, "So - when are you moving to Tomodachi, anyway?"
Corwin grinned. "Soon as you and Kate get the rest of your
books out of my room," he said.
Anne laughed. "I'll hold you to that, you know."
"Fine by me," Corwin said. His grin softened into a warmer
sort of smile, and he added in a slightly wry voice, "If I'd known
this would happen, though, I wouldn't have signed a two-year lease on
an apartment in Nekomikoka." Then he laughed. "What the hell, it's
only gold."
"OK," said Anne, smiling. "When I get back, we'll get it done
for you."
Shouldn't this be 'when are you moving to New Avalon' ? (Considerig that he's living in Nekomikoka...)
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