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Forum Name: Symphony of the Sword/The Order of the Rose
Topic ID: 447
Message ID: 25
#25, RE: A Less Minor Reorg
Posted by Peter Eng on Aug-11-14 at 04:17 AM
In response to message #24
>>Altered Appleseed isn't in the new chronology list. Removed in error
>>or sent to the dust bin?
>
>Binned. Oh my Grodd, so utterly, utterly binned.
>
>--G.
>Just once, why can't somebody not notice
>something like that?

>-><-

Can I notice long enough to applaud the removal? The script format grates on me in general, but it really bugs me here, because I'm used to finding the stories in third-person, or the occasional first-person. I like the intent of Altered Appleseed, but the presentation was unappealing.

Peter Eng
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Also, I imagine you could write the story again, hit the most important plot points, and make it much better if you really needed to.