>>waiting for a sequence to be done reduces the chances of the author
>>getting to the end and realizing that a bit back near the beginning
>>should have been different, which maybe you're pretty confident won't
>>happen in this case, but is something that occasionally bugs me a bit
>>about the entire genre (genre? medium?) of serialized fiction.
>
>Oh heck, I'm not confident of anything. This is an experiment! A
>serial experiment. But hopefully without quite as much
>gratuitous surrealism as that phrase might tend to suggest in anime
>fans of a certain age. :)

I wasn't suggesting that you should take our comments lain down (sorry). Anyway, I for one promise not to get overly critical of what has been sufficiently disclaimed as an experiment in a New Thing.

dbrandon