LAST EDITED ON Jul-31-18 AT 03:36 PM (EDT)
 
>I enjoyed this, but I don't have a lot to say, just that after
>listening to the track again, I think that
>
>make it better
>do it faster
>makes us stronger
>more than ever
>hour after
>our work is never over
>
>(as reported in the fic) should actually be
>
>make it better
>do it faster
>makes us stronger
>more than ever
>hour after hour
>work is never over
>
>Not entirely sure, but it seems to make a bit more sense?

I'm pretty sure it's a play on the homophones (that is to say, it's both, but there's no really good way of depicting that symbolically); "our work is never over" turns up by itself several times.

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