>I liked the little touches in this chapter, like the shout out to
>other fics in the fandom such as Borie's streaking tendencies and
>Jersey in general. She makes a great Sergeant at Arms.

That’s primarily my contribution, because I read more KanColle fics than Gryph does.

>I'm clearly missing something important about the Abducted by Carriers
>scene, isn't the original Kaga already present and accounted for in
>Valhalla?

Well, to quote the author of “The Last Angel”, [ FRAGMENT DELETED ]

> Were the others that eager for the two to meet? The uproar
>over her and Yamato seems odd given how the assembly took the lighter
>ships mostly in stride.

Well, Carrier and Battleship missing-companion issues tend to be felt and expressed more... extremely than those of cruisers and destroyers. After all, since when have battleships ever been subtle?

—- Philip

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