It's funny, I had just read through HL 1.0 yesterday, and TIA is a worthy successor...and you did it all (the Starkwire posts and the piece itself) in a week? I hope it didn't burn your brain from the inside out.

I think it's cool that you managed to preserve a lot of the elements from the original, the Camaro, the initial encounter with Priss, the repartee between Stark(Gryph) and Zoner...but it's all been updated and "remastered" (for lack of a better word).

For some reason, the stakeout scenes reminded me of the scene The French Connection where O'Doyle is freezing his ass off, while the bad guys he's tailing are livin' it up in a posh restaurant.

All in all, I thought it was great.

- Zatch