LAST EDITED ON Jan-28-06 AT 06:35 AM (EST)
 
"Hey BITCH!" he yelled. The boomer paused, turning its head
back to track the source of the challenge. A moment later its head
vanished in an orange fireball.
"HA!" Zoner cried.
The boomer whirled and lunged toward him, its head -
apparently undamaged - emerging from the cloud of smoke.
"FUCK!" Zoner cried.

Mwahahaha.

He's one funny bastage. Ya know, the above does put a pretty monomolecular point on the whole affair, dunnit?

I'm mightily impressed with the narrow line you're walking between getting the protagonists involved while not totally stealing the show...and I'm loving the set-up potential for a nifty tale on the history between Tony and Ben. Would I be correct in assuming the "explosion" flashback is part of that?

Speaking of oldschool Stark, I find it highly cool that you've kept the stark pacemaker :D I especially like how you've made one fine mess of a cliffhanger out of having it (Damn you.).

Poor Nene.

~AVG

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