>4) You might consider taking the genre and setting of the piece into
>account. This is a near-future cyberpunk action series, not
>Pathologically Detailed Martial Arts Theatre.

Oh, so you mean it's not Last Order? ;)

>In conclusion, unpucker your fanboy sphincter and cut us all some
>fucking slack. Selah.

Your way with words never ceases to amaze me. I salute you!

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