Amusing. Small typo:

Sosuke watched her go, then got up, bowed slightly to Lindsey with a cordial, "Miss Williams," and left just long enough after Kaname that he couldn't quite be said to have followed her.

Linsey's last name is "Willows," yes?

Also, very nice reference to Colonel Flagg, the man that Sigmund Freud describes as "Spooky." At least according to Dr. Freedman, who I suspect has an office somewhere near the Psych Ward of New Avalon General, and lunches with Drs. Hunicutt, Winchester, and Pierce from time to time. (Hell, he's probably the fourth for their weekly poker game.)