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Topic ID: 149
Message ID: 7
#7, Notes from Development Hell
Posted by Gryphon on Jun-18-13 at 10:47 AM
In response to message #0
Chief,

Just got the script for your birthday adventure. Good stuff, but BS&P have a couple of concerns with it:

1) They're worried about the scene where the Circle of Horns guy cuts himself. She's a vampire, can't she just bite him?

2) They're also concerned about the frequency of the phrase "love slave". Can we do anything with that?

Get back to me about these things as soon as you can, OK?

Thanks,
Jerry


Jerry -

1) At that point she's basically in the vampire equivalent of a diabetic coma, so, uh, no, she can't really "just bite him". I'm sure Gisela can do some creative stuff with camera angles, just make sure you flag it in the shooting script she gets.

2) "Love slave" is already a euphemism. How much more abstract do you want me to get? "Recreational indentured servant"? Sheesh, man. I got nothin' for you here. If the lawyers are that bothered about it, we'll just cut that gag. You might want to mention to them that if we do that, they get to explain it to Marcy.

Mahalo,
--G.