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Topic ID: 78
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#0, Omnibus 4!
Posted by Offsides on Aug-27-09 at 03:19 PM
Very nice - I really liked "Mr. Midshipman Tenjou: For the Good of the Service", it's a very Utena-ish thing to do. But I found the early breaks in the story without any real visual break to be rather difficult to follow. May I request a minor formatting change to make it a little clearer (such as an extra blank line)?

Other than that, jolly good show!

Offsides

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