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Topic ID: 99
Message ID: 18
#18, RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun
Posted by Matrix Dragon on Apr-08-11 at 04:17 AM
In response to message #15
>It's interesting that the scene gives you the impression that he's
>"broken", since that's not at all the effect I was aiming for. I
>mean, yes, he's bit preoccupied in that last scene, but that's largely
>because the sudden and unexpected encounter with the dread shadow of
>Unicron has quite knocked his other train of thought all ahoo and he
>needs to take a couple of moments to chase it all back into order
>again before he can articulate it, not because he's having some kind
>of a breakdown.

I didn't take it as a breakdown, so much as G admitting how much he wanted Tali in his life more. I quite liked that scene actually.

Matrix Dragon, J. Random Nutter