LAST EDITED ON Apr-09-11 AT 10:34 PM (EDT)
 
>I admit is somewhat odd that given all of the humanoid women that
>associate themselves with Gryphon, he'd seek out the one that he is
>the least biologically compatible with.

Well, you know how it is. Bunty Bailey's character from the "Take On Me" video wasn't available; you make do.

>Any other considerations
>aside, and unless I completely missed some detail, they can't even
>hold hands without one of them being in an encounter suit. On the
>other hand, maybe he missed her.

Oh, Mordin took care of that ages ago. They think. They've never actually had an opportunity to test it.

>Anyway, great work as always. Nice to see that your talent for
>interlacing the various details of the source material is still deft.

I wasn't quite sure that bridging the Tron elements over to the "real" world was going to fly, but once I had the sequence all put together, it worked for me. And I've got an explanation for where that technology comes from and why it looks like that on one of the other burners; there are oblique callouts to it in parts of this text. So that's something to look forward to, if you're into that kind of thing...

--G.
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