Go back to previous page
Forum URL: http://www.eyrie-productions.com/Forum/dcboard.cgi
Forum Name: Mini-Stories
Topic ID: 99
Message ID: 44
#44, RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun
Posted by Tzukumori on Apr-12-11 at 06:28 AM
In response to message #43
-She had spent last week...
-She had spent the last year...
-She had spent three summers...
-She had spent his entire life...

Oh, I get it now.

The syntax just gave me pause, that's all. I've never seen "Person A doing something for a duration of time that was expressed from the third-person context of Person B" expressed that way before. I usually see it written as "All his life/as far back as he could remember, she had been doing <insert thingy here>".

-T.Z.
==================================================

"I believe that when life gives you lemons, you make lemonade.
Then find someone whose life gives them vodka and have a party."
--Ron White, stand-up comedian.

==================================================