LAST EDITED ON Aug-01-14 AT 02:49 PM (EDT)
 
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>This looks great. One minor nitpick though: I would rotate the streak
>of fire 180 degrees, so it looks like it's going up and out, rather
>than down and in.

It's actually not doing either; that's Sozin's CometComet Zuko, it's passing through the outer stratosphere many miles above the camera.

(Yes, I know comets don't do that. I have to work with what the show gives me. :)

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