Nicely done. Mind you, the way that City of Heroes keeps giving you these short stories, you may end up having to make a section for them on the site.

Still, I liked it. This isn't the kind of superhero story you tend to see, especially since most comic titles tend to keep their heroes 'ageless'. There's not exactly a long list of older retired heroes that have been around long enough to be grandparents.

Matrix Dragon, J. Random Nutter