Fun story. Trust Jen to put together her superhero gear while running about getting in trouble... Given that's how she ended up as the General the first time, if I remember right. Nice to see her lucks going better here.Cinderblock was fun. Another new character of you or a friend, I suppose? The Die Hard reference had me giggling, and the twist with the robot made me laugh as I guessed her dad designed the original.
Fun story all round.
Matrix Dragon, J. Random Nutter