I have adjusted the dialogue in the last scene, where Hannelore visits Gryphon to request his counsel regarding the letter she received from Fritz, to reflect developments in Gallian Gothic. This was surprisingly tricky to do for such a small edit, since I had to preserve the feeling of melancholy while simultaneously injecting a note of good news, but overall I think it works. It may even have lifted Hannelore's spirits a little and given her some hope that she could make her situation work after all.

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