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Forum Name: Our Witches at War/Gallian Gothic
Topic ID: 114
Message ID: 52
#52, RE: OWaW 21: Sea Trials
Posted by Pasha on Dec-02-20 at 08:36 PM
In response to message #0

>EDITED TO NOTE: If you just arrived, you should probably be aware
>that, owing to some of the traffic you'll see below, I'm already
>thinking about rewriting this one. :/

If you do, and far be it from me to stop you, but I'm on team "keep the fight scene out". I liked that we could read between the lines of "she thought his methods were bullshit, they threw down and he showed her in the only way she'd get across that they aren't, cut to the follow up of them returning home drunken friends"

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-Pasha
"Don't change the subject"
"Too slow, already did."