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Forum Name: Our Witches at War/Gallian Gothic
Topic ID: 126
Message ID: 1
#1, RE: teaser/frag: GG3/V
Posted by Astynax on Apr-26-21 at 01:09 PM
In response to message #0
Sakuya seems to be feeling especially playful, at least this is more than I think we've seen in one burst before. Maybe Marisa just brings out that side of folks.

Also, small typo: "a preoccupied looking coming onto her face"
Pretty sure that ought to be 'a preoccupied look'.

"Behold the power of crowd-sourced proofreading, or something."