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Forum Name: Our Witches at War/Gallian Gothic
Topic ID: 26
Message ID: 0
#0, OWaW 04
Posted by Matrix Dragon on Feb-07-15 at 09:10 AM
Nice story, fun setup, I fell in love with Hannalore the moment she broke down laughing... But there is one slight problem, assuming I'm not just stupid. But when our Heroes split into two groups, you referred to Erica as Ursula until the moment she dropped her disguise, which got really confusing really fast.

Matrix Dragon, J. Random Nutter