>
>So, I had a go at that, rearranging that bit of the omnibus so that
>the scenes go in order instead of having a misplaced IMR-flash-forward
>cold open in the middle of everything. I had to write a couple of
>transition paragraphs to make it flow properly, but I think it works
>reasonably well. See what y'all think.
>
>--G.

Well, I can't speak for the others, but it does flow much better to myself; especially since it makes it a lot clearer that the reason UF-G is kinda examining the stars so... umm... wheezely is cause Flandre just rang his bell. Too bad for Flandre that that just kind of gets UF-G, like Utena, to level up!