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Forum Name: Our Witches at War/Gallian Gothic
Topic ID: 97
Message ID: 9
#9, RE: GG 2/V: Une Inconnue Bien Connue
Posted by Gryphon on Oct-17-20 at 06:02 PM
In response to message #6
>In fact, looking at
>the passage now, there's a paragraph missing that I have a clear
>memory
of writing which would have spelled that part out as well.
>I wonder what the hell happened there? Grumble. Anyway, she is
>only talking about Flandre there. Everyone else is out of luck
>if she has any say in the matter, which of course she has.

I hunted in the "cuts" bin, thinking I might have stuck the lost paragraph in there with the intent of moving it (that scene got chopped around a bit) and forgot to put it back, but it wasn't in there, so either I failed to preserve it for some reason, or meant to include it to the point of having mentally composed it, but then managed to forget to actually type it.

Either way, I've reconstructed it where it ought to have ended up, to the best of my recall. There is also a new annotation regarding a turn of phrase Remilia uses therein, which is important for context.

--G.
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