While i don't know what you mean by "another of these" I'm honestly just trying to get the frame work of the story, which like i said i've gotten from you. though i'm a little sad Shinji doesn't show up for a while and i'm a bit put off by DJ's tude ATM I'm enjoying what i've managed to read thus far. (Oddly i bookmarked and joined the site awhile ago but only remembered it when a number of reviewers used DJ when comparing a created character of my own. honestly he's a little lippy but i wouldn't say he's a Gary-stu like everyone says)