>I just finished reading chapter three and since i don't know where
>reviews go here's my current score and opinion.

Dude... Just sit back, enjoy the ride, and try not to think too hard about it. There's plenty of time for that -after- you're done with your first read-through.

>My opinion however is mostly positive as it's good writing. Having
>said this i find a few things out of place.
>
>1) Rei's reaction to DJ doesn't sit well. Rei didn't talk to anyone
>except the commander until Shinji saved her life. and DJ arrives sits
>down and she feels compelled to talk to him? this seems wrong but then
>maybe your Rei doesn't take the meds the original character did.

Don't be silly. DJ did the same thing that Shinji did, and more. Afterwards, DJ goes and spends some quiet time with her. Wouldn't you feel compelled to be a little more talkative with someone who comes into your hospital room to give you some friendly quiet company?

>2)DJ has a flat background one that we're just supposed to accept, not
>to mention he's a bit of a road runner. I know it's early and this
>could change but it still doesn't sit well.

Define 'flat background'. If you mean that he really doesn't have much of a background, then chill out. This is a pretty big piece, and in something this size you're not gonna learn all the big details until you're at least half-way through.

>3)sync tables all out of wack. by how DJ sync's with a suit he'd have
>berserker all the time if it had his mom of bulter in it.

The hell? Could you kindly clarify what on Earth you're trying to say here?

>otherwise i find the story to be unfolding nicely, i like jon quite a
>bit for some reason.

Yeah, I know. Hear it all the time. Take note of my snarkage directed at the other NXE reviewers back in the other thread you started. Honestly, it makes me wonder why so many people gotta be so pretentious about fanfic. It ain't like these guys are trying to get published here or anything.

Gryphon and myself will be the first to tell you: we differ wildly. However, we do have one critical thing in common, and that thing is that we both like to have fun writing the kinda stuff that makes people minded like us become giddy with fanboy/girl delight.

I'm not saying this to be elitist or anything. I just want you to stop over-thinking this (or, as we like to say in the Navy, don't nuke it) and just enjoy the read through to the end. This isn't fanfiction.net, and besides, you wouldn't put down The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Glalaxy every chapter to dash off an email to Douglas Adams, would you?

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