>>Oh hey - yeah, that explanation works much better. I like it.
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>It was convenient that we had already long since established that
>Misato doesn't know shit about anything technological. Gave Maya and
>Truss someone to explain it all to, without resorting to the clunky "I
>am explaining this to someone who, logically, should know it better
>than I do" stuff the AGSys guys do in the original version.
>
>

Aye, that's pretty handy. Also, I liked how you kept the consequences of the original, but in a different 'shape' - as well as annotation of atmospheric conditions pertinent to the emergency