>(Hopefully it's this general board, not the other general board, that
>this message should go to.)
>
>I've been kicking around an idea in my head, nudged in various
>directions by various things I've read, of trying my hand at fanfic...
>specifically, an Evangelion/Sailor Moon fusion. (Moon Kingdom and
>Dark Kingdom fought using giant robots/youma. 1999 lunar mission
>discovered remains, accidentally breached seal on moon, Second Impact
>carved moon into perpetual crescent. 14-year-old Usagi Tsuniko is
>recruited by SELENE to pilot against Dark Kingdom forces now attacking
>earth from moon.)
>
I can't resist, though I'm not slamming the concept:

METTALIA: FREEEEEE! After thousands of years, now it's the time to CONQUER EARTH!

SELENE: METALLIA HAS BEEN FREED FROM HER ETERNAL PRISON. BRING ME TEENS WITH ATTITUDE.

>Anyway, the reason I bring this up here is that, well, I'm gonna want >prereaders. (No, I'm not taking individual offers at this time; like
>I said, I'm still kicking it around, and I wouldn't want to waste your
>time if this never leaves the metaphorical drawing board.) Thing is,
>I'm not really sure where one gets them.

Now this leads to its own pluses and minuses, especially when you're starting out. The trouble is, that in all likeliness, the odds on you getting constructive help on the parts you want to are pretty slim at first. Perhaps you could find one or two people online who'll give you the right direction, but I wouldn't precisely hold your breath. I've shopped many thing about, to get (rather frustratingly) the comment 'coool' or 'I like this' and not a thing more or elaborating on why they thought so. Not what's feeling off, not anything about odd structure, etc. (Trust me, there are many individuals who accuse me of wearing an Encounter Suit in my spare time considering how I mangle the english language.)

The best source is what they said above, especially if you have friends who are fans. Listen to what they're saying, and if someone makes even minor comments, try to follow up and see why he or she brought it up. If you find a nitpicker, you might have found your blessing and curse at the same time. The good news is he or she will help you tighten things up, will help you see flaws you weren't expecting, etc. The bad news is, they will prove that there will _always_ be something off or niggling. Unless of course, you're at the level of publication without editing (news flash: Most published authors aren't at that level). There comes a time where, especially when it's for your own enjoyment, you'll have to say 'it's good enough, I think'. And hope that you'll get any commentary back. Honestly, don't hold you breath (especially for your first work), but if it does come, it's rather gratifying.

I would look for some of the various general anime fanfic development lists. It will add to the chances of someone responding, but there is also usually a problem of volume on the list. So your mileage may vary on response day by day, let alone by who else is posting what.

Good luck to ye.

--Mek