Random thoughts in no particular order:I'm loving this series. I really like the tone of the recent Exile works overall, and even though I don't know anything about the Mass Effect worlds, the way you've meshed the races in is very nicely done.
Turns out I was wrong about the mole, but at least my suspect turned out to have a sordid past of their own :)
I love all the pieces that are spiraling toward a great big crash (Especially with Kei making an appearance in full aggression mode).
I don't see this ending particularly well for Tali, sadly. At least in the short term.
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Chris can't handle chemicals