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Daeore
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Dec-15-01, 07:22 AM (EDT)
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"Inspiring"
 
   Gryphon.

I too am a writer, thou I am currently limited to my sailor moon fanfics. (I have 3 compleated, and one in the works). And, as a writer to a writer, I have a few questions and comments to make. (Pertaining to Warrior's legacy)

Comments.
Over all. Its a wonderful story. Great plot, excellent character development, unexpected character development, (zangief? a nice guy? all the movies make him come off as an egomaniac with single cell intelligence. Who'd have thought that? *grin*)

Alot of the referances you make, old and new, are really well done and clear. Even thou I was about 7 or so at the time, your description of the blonde from Bionic six was poking at almost forgotten memories.

You've also done some research. Some is common knowledge to most, but you take it a step up and elaborate on things.

Questions.

What made you choose the "first person" point of view style?
How did you manage to cross that many things over in the same story without fouling up?
Whats the joke behind the Tiki mask. *grin*

Anyhow... Great story! Looking forward to reading more when you write it. And reading the rest of the writing on the page.


Oh. To Zoner. Ever play MekTon? hahaha!


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